All Comments on 'Tempting John'

lol.

I think there are some hypocritical "critics" here. If the 'hero' of the story was actually a heroine, we'd get the negative comments and such about whores and wimp husbands need to grow some cajones.

This was pretty good and quite a chuckle. Usually the women have the self-control and the guys can't hold back. Here the women are more out of control than our hero. I think his wife should have put him into a chastity device if she really wanted him to last for 5 days without an ejaculation! This story was almost a "Non-consent/Reluctance" story in the way our man got essentially raped by his boss's wife, his secretary, and her friend!

Sure beats that wimp-husband / slut wife shit stories that various idiots like bonnietaylor put out to waste space.

WHAT A SICK IMAGINATION

awesome story, got me hard as fuck!

Awesome story bro

Your character didn't need tempting just a crappy fuckwit like the author

Boring as fuck, predictable and disgusting. Please do the world a favour and stop writin. There is nothing erotic about a cheating husband and whoring Secretaries. It's been done to death.

Shoulda just blown it in his wife and tried next time. A day or two before is just fine anyways. Doesnt take much for him to cheat. Good writing just not believable character

She doesn't need to be ovulating to get pregnant. Where did you get your medical facts? And him banging up against her cervix with his penis is much more likely to hurt her than not. Badly done drivel.

1 star

I didnt even make it to the bottom of the first page before the stupid in this slapped me right upside the head too damned hard for my tastes.