by Hamlin
Thank you so much for your feedback. Without giving anything away, this is certainly not a wimp brother gets cucked by slutty sister story. I do hope you'll enjoy the rest.
Still a good premise.
Woild have been better concentrating on Trevor, Mary and Stacy.
Four stars.
Yeah, gotta echo an earlier comment. It really does seem like he's a wimp who is being dominated by a purely evil sister. (I haven't really seen any redeeming qualities that would suggest otherwise) Still, it's well-written though.