All Comments on 'Tension and Release'

by Writingforfunn

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KlitomaticKlitomatic11 months ago

Brings back a memory that had faded with time, so pleasant.

lc69hunterlc69hunter11 months ago

beautiful connection

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Nice premise.

Well written.

Could have used more in the way of her teasing/edging his cock when she was handling it. Maybe some action with his balls too.

And you wrote "...but her body was just as taught." You meant TAUT.

Nevertheless, five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

very good story and well told, thank you.

Seattle1954Seattle195411 months ago

Very very hot. I love exhibitionism, and you really brought it to life. Superb!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Please write more

AtrampboyAtrampboy11 months ago

Loved the story and it's very well td. Thank you. I hope to enjoy more from tale from you

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

Sooooo hot 🔥

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Interesting premise.

Nice buildup.

Don't understand why they couldn't have gotten each other off rather than using their own hands.

Could have used some playing with his balls.

Could have uses some edging rather than rushing toward orgasms.

Four stars.

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