by Writingforfunn
Nice premise.
Well written.
Could have used more in the way of her teasing/edging his cock when she was handling it. Maybe some action with his balls too.
And you wrote "...but her body was just as taught." You meant TAUT.
Nevertheless, five stars.
Very very hot. I love exhibitionism, and you really brought it to life. Superb!
Loved the story and it's very well td. Thank you. I hope to enjoy more from tale from you
Interesting premise.
Nice buildup.
Don't understand why they couldn't have gotten each other off rather than using their own hands.
Could have used some playing with his balls.
Could have uses some edging rather than rushing toward orgasms.
Four stars.