by ifonlytofly
I remember a similar scene in the movie "Evil Dead" from the 70's or 80's. Interesting how you developed it. There are some spelling errors that detract from the story that you may want to edit. Like "they're being incredibly perky" would be "their being incredibly perky".
--to try to use a generic name--"mixed salts"?
I'm not trying to stop you. For a test, a party, whatever--
This "med"--and I didn't even take much--almost killed me.
I can't help but think--even if it's only me--that's a pretty big deal.
just for example--middle-aged and older women--just for example-- can be prescribed "speed." But if it's that great, maybe I should have kept my scripts up?
into your mouth? So you won't hurt anyone you love?'
'O. Ok.'"
And I've had legal scripts for it.
I'm guessing here--if it's "fun," then , you have a legal script for it.
If it's not fun and maybe hate it, then the entire thing is a mistake.
The thing is, with all the people wanted to take--whatever--just be glad if you don't like it. And don't take it.
after about 20? 30? minutes of initial ingestion of a very low dose cap of Adderall, slow (before "Vyvance") release.
He said it made him feel bad. He didn't like it.
He "didn't like it."
"They gave me heroin. They gave me crack. Whatever--"
maybe it's cause my mum breast-fed me for 2 years. Whatever.
(She'd like to think this.)
about not taking any prescribed "speed" of any kind--
I feel so relaxed--
that I can imagine almost (not truly mean stuff--and don't mess up my genuine pleasure) anything--
I'm not just imagining that I feel different and happier without whatever kinds of "speed"--
I did not choose this med. I'd never taken it before. I just went to a "doctor" because a teacher had suggested I have my "gifted" son tested for "ADHD."
I, at least (my son refused to take any "meds"), was chemically raped. I know that sounds--mad.
it made me think of a horror novel about vines I read a year or so ago--and now I've forgotten its name.
It was, as is this, a good story.
It could use a little more detail. The point of view kind of changes in the middle from what she is feeling to what a bystander may be seeing. It is a good story, you just need to flesh it out some more.
Thank you for letting us read your work, and please continue to write.
Sherrylee1015
Could use more details, draw out how she was played with. Maybe some tossing of her breasts, or how the tentacles continues moving down her throat as she moaned wan tingly.