by WJVikars
Pros: The premise and opening scene are whimsically absurd, and what little we get of the characters' personality promises a charming relationship.
Cons: The actual story barely scratches any of this. Instead of being showcased within the text, Sable's monstrosity is left for the reader to infer, and so what -should- be this piece's emotional core is easily missed.
Storyline with so much potential and two intriguing characters. Loved “Pancakes” and this piece as well. Would like more background, though still way on board.