All Comments on 'Terry Pt. 01'

Nice intro, thus far!

This is a very engaging story, it captivated me from the first paragraph. I like that it features likable people with standard jobs and a normal day-to-day lives.

Looking forward to the next chapter.

This story has LOTS of potential. I hope you update soon.

Great start and two interesting characters; I like it how you describe them, as though they're real people. I can see this getting pretty steamy and look forward to reading more.

Your story oozes love between Tom and Terry, and gives every promise of going "full blast" into a real loving relationship. Tom develops a really loving care for Terry, and Terry learns to accept it. Looking forward to great exploratory sex between these two when Terry feels better. Make them gently loving toward each other, as I think Terry learns what kindness and gentleness can do. Keep going please!