All Comments on 'Tessa - Game of Thralls'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
So good

Great writing! I was fully immersed in your story. The struggle was so real and intense.

TanukiTanukiover 6 years ago
Less sex and more story would make it better

I enjoyed the idea and the sex is well written, but I'd have preferred less sex and more buildup, character development or even multiple episodes. Good climactic scene, but some readers may not get that far with all the sex.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great

I really liked this a lot, but I wish it had ended with her getting taken by the lord.

FurorFuror4 months ago

Wow! Such a brilliant and wicked idea! I'm really loved it!

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