by valmcjames
Great writing! I was fully immersed in your story. The struggle was so real and intense.
I enjoyed the idea and the sex is well written, but I'd have preferred less sex and more buildup, character development or even multiple episodes. Good climactic scene, but some readers may not get that far with all the sex.
I really liked this a lot, but I wish it had ended with her getting taken by the lord.