by RallyWeasel
Great Story RallyWeasel! ! I'm so glad you found literotica.
Bethany
Search for stories by handcuffgirl to read the sequel.
A very original premise, and an ingenious plot. But the "victim" remains curiously untouched by her progressive erotic entrapment. So the story is essentially a series of rather clinically elaborated sex acts, and ultimately unsatisfying. "A" for effort, "C" for arousal.
Loved the premise from start to finish...hope there's more coming!!!! Dede
I love this story and the only thing that can make this better is if you expanse on it a little more like adding more captive stories
The story just ends too abruptly. What happens after she wins? What is her new life like? Does she even leave? I just feel like there are too many possibilities of what happens next that are not explored or alluded to leaving the story feeling unfinished.