All Comments on 'Testing Daddy Pt. 02'

You are telling the story quite descriptively and you are most definitely improving since you began doing stories on this site. Now, Loose every single ounce of the "silly" waxed and / or "shaved" pussy "nonsense." Peer ratings are usually in the 3 range when shaved or waxed descriptions begin. Why? No one wants a shaved or waxed pussy on on day one because it results in a nasty disgusting completely pointless mess of razor burn, chaffed peeling skin, prickly stubble, infected hairs, and pus oozing pimples on the next round. And for the record, a quick re-shave, only results in blood oozing pimples and hair follicles. So, for future reference, don't turn your female characters into something on paper that looks like a plucked chicken's ass and think it is going to help your ratings in any way. You writing skills are improving. Don't screw it up with stubble and goose bumps.

With the height difference, there is no way they are kissing while he is entering her.