by rapidran
Excellent & very erotic story!
Ally & Bill
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Very good. story and sex in right proportions.Let's see more.
Fantasmic! That was so damn hot!
sexy and sensual.
I am whipping up a batch of love potion #69
The overall story was good. Your characters were undeveloped. Perhaps you have them explain things in your second chapter.