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All Comments on 'TFAM - The Magic Touch Ch. 02'

by KniteRonin

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good reading good writing kept me at it! Looking for more. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This is going in an interesting direction of mind control with alternative direction, keep going please.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Good storyline, well written and PROOF READ! Keep going!

KniteRoninKniteRonin9 months agoAuthor

I am sorry if there are any spelling or grammatical errors. These are all first drafts that I am posting as I write them. I have been looking for an editor that can help me polish these up in terms of overall flow and cadence, but I have only had one response so far.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Nice new and interesting ideas for "powers"......

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