All Comments on 'TFAM - The Magic Touch Ch. 07'

Interested to see where this goes and how some of the storyline will play out with previous chapters that setup some things. Noticed one small detail, that kinda confused things in the story. When they originally left to go to the funeral, Candy checked out of her room cause she was moving in with Ronin. But later when they returned to pick up their tools and stuff, Candy still had her hotel room that she had previously checked out of in a previous chapter. That's the only flaw I've seen so far, minor detail that most would not even pay attention to. But as an avid reader on this site, minor details are everything on a story. But enjoying the story and can't wait to see how the "curse" plays out and a meetup with that hot detective? Maybe a wedding for Ronin and Candy?

Waiting patiently for the next chapter. Hint. Hint. 😊