by GaryAPB
A promising beginning to a good story if it is anything like the first one. I look forward to reading more.
Boyd
Just the right amount of everything. I look forward to the rest, and to anything else you decide to write.
His beer was CUCKhaven Gold.
Nice tie-in with Part 1.
“We both chose to get back together, as free individuals that felt that was our best route to our personal future happiness. We're there because we want to be, not because I've granted her some reluctant, watchful pardon. Nor because she has chosen to stick with me, despite being unhappy, or anything like that."
This is the first thing that makes Part 1 work for me.