All Comments on 'THAL - Long Term Substitute Ch. 00'

Link to the original story: https://www.literotica.com/s/teaching-her-a-lesson-pt-01

It's really good. A classic!

A very good start. I like the play on the wording of the command. THAL was a fun read, but I always thought it could have been so much more and have wanted to see some authors play in that universe. So, yea, very much looking forward to seeing what you come up with!

I cannot wait to see what you do with this and where you take it. It has so many possibilities that I was surprised nothing more was done but then that seems to be the way when either the author runs out of ideas, gets bored with the story themself or decides to stop writing. You have a great start and immediately caught my interest. No matter what direction and outcome, thanks for giving it a shot.

Very much conflicted. Love the first story and the original protagonist. The idea of another male protagonist tho, and him stealing the other woman,is chalenging. For it is as the potential of turning very ugly. Anyway Good Luck and hope for the best

Not sure, love the original. Cucking the original Cannon is not necessarily interesting to me.

It's P=NP. ;-)