All Comments on 'Thanks Grampa'

by rufriter

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UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 6 years ago
Great story

Not what I expected. Pleasantly surprised!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Proof read!!

You lost me at “bowling along the highway” six words into your story!

happymuffinhappymuffinover 6 years ago
Hot shit but

You set it up perfectly I mean in could have gone in a bit more detail with she shed part and the last part with the climax it was just not enough in my opinion.

Still hot shit

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