All Comments on 'That 90's Gap In-Between Ch. 05'

by KinkNaWink

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Anonymousover 7 years ago

Yaaassss

Well damn.

Harlee better get her shit together and quick

fcknfresh over 7 years ago

The fact that you have incited REAL rage for Harlee means you're a great writer. Keep it coming!

Anonymousover 7 years ago

Just a note

It's very good but you REALLY need to proofread better or get someone to do it for you. You have a couple of areas with garbled words that make no sense and your phrasing is off in several spots making your meaning unclear. Take care of that and you should be golden. Keep at it!

KinkNaWink over 7 years agoAuthor

Thank You.

Thank you so much for all the feedback you keep me wanting to continue the story!!

In regards to the comment titled Just A Note, you are right my proofreading needs to be more thorough. I always can use an extra pair of eyes to catch what mine don't. So thank you for your honesty! Xoxo KinkNaWink

Anonymousover 4 years ago

Is that it?

Are you coming back? Lol.

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