All Comments on 'That Boston Boy (an Affair)'

You write passion and blossoming love beautifully. Hot sex and warm feelings. Love it!

Your writing is captivating, couldn’t have loved it more than I did. What a wonderful and beautiful love story!

Wow, what a powerful, emotional and beautifully written bittersweet love story this was. 5⭐s can't come close to doing this justice.

This was in no way nerdy and way more than fun, especially for Daniel our poetic character! I’d love to hear how they spend the extra day and hopefully reflect with one another on the lackluster relationships they have somehow slipped into. Will they have the courage to break out of their sad old safe habits and go for their young love that has been slowly growing in the shade and into the fullness of the summer sun?

Thank you all! It's really a different kind of story for me, with a lot of crazy references and things... but I hope it continues to make readers feel something:)

What a beautiful story!! Well written, fun and sexy. I felt a lot of beautiful emotions. I’d love another chapter!!!

The biggest danger of an affair is the fact that it always seems to lead to falling in love. Add the factor of both having a partner who, though not present, fuels the fire. In thinking about this story I also have a familiar line. Better to have loved and lost than never to have loved at all. Having felt similar fleeting passion and as I read this work, I found myself being more of an observer present in the room with these lovers. A very well written piece.

The good stories make your heart ache a little. Bittersweet perfection. I hated for it to end.

Really appreciate the feedback! In case it wasn't obvious, the last page is almost entirely in iambic pentameter ;)

"tis a joy when first we begin but a bitter sadness when we are done, leaving naught but tears trailing restlessly in the wind"

- a foolish poet

good story, thanks man.