All Comments on 'That Day at Chandler's Lake'

Beautifully written, a thoughtful piece of prose to delight those with a brain who appreciate that being with a beautiful woman is not just the animalistic coupling of two street dogs. I look forward to your next contribution.

This was a delightful flash, full of poetry and romance, and a nice way to reaffirm a loving relationship after a coma. Loved it.

This was so beautifully written, with such a lovely ending too!

Gray sympathies.

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And to SpencerFiction, thank you for defending my story, and for the complimentary comments you left.

Henry's monologue was nice and steamy, and the ending was unexpected... with his wife waking in the hospital. But I loved that she wanted to go to Chandler's Lake. :)

great

Beautiful, emotional, memory lane at its best!!