All Comments on 'That Friday feeling - An Xmas Tale'

Where’s the rest of the story?

More please, such a lovely take of sibling romance and some babymaking. Please keep going

"18 carrots you know..." Uh, unless she's a vegan with a real love for carrots, it's carats, sheesh.

Good short story.

Should be "18 karats" not carrots

Lovely

Fuck me, that was the epitome of short and sweet. I usually gp in more for the longer, meticulously built stories, but this felt like a small perfect slice of that. Excellent sentence structure.

Also, the earlier commenter who was all derisive about "carrots" was wrong. It's karats. And I love that he was wrong! Wahaha.

Oh man I cannot wait for more of these two.

I didn't realize until I reached the end that there was a previous installment. I always try to read stories in the intended order. Now I'm going to have to go find the first chapter of these two. 5/5

Lovely short one ... may be too short ...

It's Ben a year, how about a follow-up?

Please continue this.

Very touching and sensual...more than just sex

Five stars.