by FargingBastage
4 pages of setup ended nowhere, a little disappointing. Hope we don't have to wait for continuation.
This wanders around and goes nowhere. But I’m uneasy as to where it will wind up.
Who need to read other fetish-cuck tales since there are already millions in this category ? It's a waste.
All we got from that was that the girls are obviously manipulating people. Greg still has a thing for Melissa. Lisa has a few more "things" going on with multiple men and that is a mixed up message. Mike is a moron. Weak, jealous and trying to get Greg drunk so that he can fuck Lisa. Not a good ending!
Plus, the story doesn't play in a realistic way. One minute Mike is chatting and controlling himself. the next he's acting like some 18 year old teenager with the mentality of a mushroom. Really?