All Comments on 'That Hippy Chick'

Lovely warm story with a green feel. Looking forward to the next chapter

I liked this. A real sweet story, thank you for posting it.

This is my Earth Day contest entry. While unlike the majority of my writing I hope people still enjoy it!

Thank you for your comments so far they mean the world to me.

Wonderful sweet story ! Great to finally read a Literotica story with some Aussie venacular. Cheers Ali Ahmad Perth Western Australia

this was a wonderful story!! please continue it as i feel it is been left open ended.

Your story was good and I assume that since there wasn't a ch. 01 it's suppose to be completed. But it doesn't feel completed. I feel like the story could have gone alot further. I don't even remember hearing an "I love you" in the story. How can you have a romance story without love.

more please it's a nice open ending for it.

This story was lame because it was so predictable. Rich spoiled boy suddenly changes and ends up with the beautiful hippy environmentalist and it turns into true love. Give me a break these weak and useless men never get over being the type of people they are. When I run into guy's like this I ask them what they have ever accomplished on their own, without their families money. Most have never done anything worth while and are nothing without their money. These spoiled boys are shallow human beings, witch is why this story is so improbable.

I can't help thinking that this story is very unfinished.

I enjoyed so much of the story, I'm hoping that you decide to continue their love story.

please finish this. i left it unscored because if i rated it now it would be low because of that and the start is too good for that.

Sweet. Predictable. Too long, but a nice read

Why don't you finish it?

earth day, some stupid cunt deciding someone was severely mentally ill (gay), greenpeace could careless about a fucking whale , they have a communist agenda. vegetarianism??? a hippy cunt slut that fucks on a third date is moral??? romance????? erotic coupling MAYBE. gotta finish to be considered be a romance. Was this submitted to MAD Magazine?

As usual I love your stories

I want to know what happens to them

Is there a happy ever after for them?

As with Rock Chick, your story didn't "construct"...

more like "evolved."

To a nice, mellow makes-sense Happy Ending...

I like it!

Both stories leave me with a warm feeling!

Thanks. Nice, for a change!

Oh - believable characters, positive environmental community and great sex - what more can a girl want.

Love your work Ellie

A particular sex scene has been repeated in the same words from another story...... It's a bit annoying but nice work I guess..

I would have given a 5 definitely and a 6 if I could have IF you had continued the story. This was a terrible ending.

Lovely story, 5 stars but where's the end?

Ellie, have been re-reading this story...it's as good as I remember; but what happened to the other pages?

Were they stolen - or did you, perhaps, take some pages down to prevent theft?

Hope its the latter, and that you may restore the pages at some point!

Jules

Good story that needed a better ending...

I feel like there is so much more to this lovely tale. Like the relationship it details the potential is obvious.

Great plot, unfortunately too short (IMVHO) !

I think it was rolled out to fast.

You take real problems and conjure up fantastic stories from them .... It feels nice to read them and not lose the possibility that it might work in reality, on the whole .... But this seems to be a very positive view on my part .... Back to matilda, yes the ending came very abruptly in a short paragraph, it didn't quite fit, this great character of Matilda alone deserved more praise

Beautiful nonetheless

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