All Comments on 'That Little Red Dress'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Fucking in a post modern world

I like it, cold, calculating, brutal - she's just monetised by them. They are all rich and feel entitled to take a young girl for nothing but their pleasure. And she has a price for her participation. It's an effective tale of the modern world - slick, amoral and transactional.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Not too bad...

...but even a cumslut's story deserves better grammar and spelling than this. Get someone to at least proofread your work, even if you don't use a proper editor.

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