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All Comments on 'That Thing with the Cup Ch. 01'

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BenExoticBenExoticover 3 years ago
Bravo

"Stepping delicately out of the dress puddled at my feet, I turn around and reach down to retrieve it, bending at the waist so as to frame my waxed labia between my shapely cheeks." Tremendous mental imagery and beautifully written.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
AlonThor

Really? This was written 9 1/2 years ago. One and done by the author. If you want part 2, how about writing it yourself. Seems anybody can get a story published.

AlonThorAlonThorover 3 years ago
More please

Looking forward to part 2 :) Hope there is a touch in the right place to come :)

NellskitchenNellskitchenover 3 years ago
Well...

...I don't need an editor, however, your story is lovely - and loving. Looking forward to Story II. Nellskitchen

fridayamfridayamover 13 years ago
I hope

you will continue this erotic and intruiging tale. x

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