by le9endary405
Thank you for a fine first story - I have only just come across it and, especially for a first effort, I think it is very good. Don't worry too much about the mean comments - it is always far easier being a critic than a creator. Well done, more like it, please.
Both parts were really enjoyable...........Keep up the good work.....
Waiting for the next chapter........
What did mistress Carrie write on Eva's back with the magic marker, and why didn't Eva see it when she looked in the mirror?
YOMEYO