All Comments on 'That's What Best Mates Are For'

fun read, as usual, good to see you come out of hiding!

I loved it.

done. Love the humor.

Except for Joe and Jean ...naturally

This was a good story to make a grand comeback with. Please write more regularly for your fans.

Except for Joe and Jean ...naturally

Nice and smooth transition from not seeming to know if anything was really going on to clicking away on his camera.

This one could almost be an HDK story (and that is a compliment). Concise, clear, and interesting. The "that's what she said" referring to snoring and body odor was hilarious. Well done!

It is good to seeing creating a new story and interesting characters. It seems strange to me that people worry about whether or not the characters are stupid. Each has his role in building the story and you did a fine job.

A real tight story, well done and interesting. Thanks

...and without the wimpiness that plagues many of your other stories. It's short, yes, but it didn't need to be any longer.

This is your best. Short, to the point and

definite.

Keep writing.

I liked this story, although I don't think it was as good as some of your others, such as "American Dream", "Leopard's Spots", or "What a Turn Up". Please keep writing. Next time I hope to see something longer, and more focused on character development and plot than on humor. I liked the fact that the male lead was a bit stronger than in some of your stories, although sometimes some degree of cluelessness (not "wimpyness", but "cluelessness") can be fun, as long as he is assertive in the end (as in "Leopard's Spots"). Thanks again.

Don't worry about not developing characters. I don't like to take the time and energy to do that, either. That is for books...not short stories. But I digress. I always look forward to the Arsenal reference. The only problem is you don't write enough stories.

I felt like I was watching this on the BBC. Late night of course!

She accused me of sleeping with her boyfriend until he pointed out that he was more in need of being jealous then she was. I still get along with him, but she has decided that I'm not safe company.

Pity really, she had really nice...Ummm... eyes?

Good read as usual, the humour tickled my fancy.

Amanda

Like most of your stories. It doesn't always scratch the itch, but good to clear the palate once in a while.

Any critiques are from personal preference, not a lack of craft.

I really like your laid back writing style. Hoping for more from your pen to read through our long and cold Canadian Winter

No element of suspense.

Brit,

Very good as usual. I will agree with a couple of the others though; longer would have been even better.

Matt

and with lovely, gentle humour.

Why everdo have a best friend? Or mate as i guess friends are called in UK and Oz. All they ever do is fuck your wife!

As an American i prefer mating with my mate. But then we Americans can be polar opposites with our distant cousins across the big pond. Something about a shared language both seem to be confused by.

Why do i constantly see this same theme repeated so often in LW stories?

A hidden truth needing to be uncovered? Is this moreis common thansense I amhave aware of? Or maybe somein kinky fantasy like watching a prude wife gangbanged?

Seems women and old girl friends have no problem talking and sharing illicist love affairs. While hubs best life long buddy seems to believe that is a given excuse to not only fuck his best friends wife but expect hub to agree. At least in LW stories.

I am no writer, but I ask those who are....FIND ANOTHER IDEA!

Can be such a pain!

I apologize for the errors in my post i just typed. I tried some editing and somehow auto correct came back with what I guess IT thought I was typing....so sorry

Oh, and to my cousins across the pond, I was not trying to insult with my comment about a shared language that can sometimes not be understood. I know American slang and comments do not always mean same in UK or Oz.

Almost a BTB story

Thank you for a breath of mental health here in the genre of angst and suffering!

He should have hidden her clothes, too!

I like almost all your stories...This is another good one, funny and good reading...

Cheaters really caught and burned. For once a real man and not a Wimp.

If it were that easy, we'd all have done it.

5*

boy

little quick one.

Concise, funny and a great read

Thanks

Great

Enough covered keep writing stories like this

...the victims are ahead of the cheaters. Good job!

Another winner winner from the Brit. Great story.

Cheating wife and friend burned with a little humor. That works.

Well done mate

I heard it was a cracker! Whot?

Another one to add to favourites whilst reading again.

"And the baddies had a terrible time." And no more need be said! Well done, sir!

Unsatisfying.

The last two sentences ruined it for me.

I really enjoyed this story. Set the cheaters up to be exposed DIY ( do it yourself ) I would be worried working around machinery with a friend I had betrayed. Oops, there goes a finger. Thank you for the good read.

A good read, well done. worth 5 stars

[11.01.23]

Flippin Funny A.F.!

11/10!!!!!

Even though we never learned how Anne found out about the cheaters, this was a 5-star tale of BTB & BTB.

Bitch AND bastard !

Nicely done !

Always glad to read another Britease story!

5

Hard to write while laughing so hard. One of the Best I have ever read on this site.

Ha ha ha ha ha

Humor wrapped into sex and deceit. Great job with the twist, even though I smelt a rat near the stories beginning. But still brought a smile to my face.

Cute, short & funny. Doesn’t get much better than that. 5 🌟 stars.

Bill S.

Liked it but the last few paragraphs were sorely showing the pitfalls of a flash story.

Cute farce. Not to be taken seriously. Why a woman would fall for.a.fat slob who snores and smells just because he has a bigger penis is laughable. More to life than just orgasms. I have been married to a wonderful wife for 31 years. What do you remember about your marriage? Is it the best orgasms? The sex you remember most is probably the first times for various actions and positions. The first kiss, first blowjob, giving her an irgasm for the first time, first time making love on a beach, dancing in some exotic locale, your honeymoon, sex after her replying yes to your marriage proposal, some kinky nights getting drinking and playing strip poker just the two of you, some special trips to Paris, Florence, Tokyo, Dubai, Hawaii, Cabo, etc. Making love by the ocean at midnight. Fooling around in the mile high club. Making love on a balcony high up in resort. Some role-playing moments. Some days where you both stayed in bed all day except getting some food, water and using the bathroom, because the kids were away. Breaking in a new house, room by room. First time after youngest kid went to school. First time you discover a new position that curls her toes. Making love under the stars or with fireworks in the distance. My point is that orgasms are in the mind, but with a physical stimulation component. Ignoring the LW trope.of massive dicks on every other guy (check out probabilities on a penis size calculator), what do you think your wife remembers about your years together? Do you think she has an internal sensor that measures the intensity of her orgasms? And keeps a running prioritized list of the top 10, top 25, or top 50? What you both remember us the shared intimacy and the joy of sex, whether hard core f$cking or making love tenderly. It is being completely vulnerable to each other and giving each other pleasure to make beautiful music together. It is spwcial moments. Special events. Special firsts. Special locations. Special circumstances. It isn't a running count of your top orgasms. Seriously. So for a woman to throw her marriage away for 6 months of screwing a guy with a big cock who is supposedly her husband's best buddy and pal, but who has a crappy job, is a fat slob, with poor hygiene, coarse manners and snores, what does that say about the vapid bitch and her marriage. A multimonth affair is never reconcilable. Not even blackmail sex makes sense.on that timescale unless yo protect loved ones from physical harm. Even then get help! Nah it is a repeated betrayal and shows a complete lack of respect to the aggrieved spouse snd a total breach of trust. Love is.not.enohuu to cover that up. A

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Hehe. Pretty good even though the big penis trope is so overdone and nonsensical. Well it is fiction. Yeah fat slob, who drools and snores, with crappy job, no future, balding, smelly, yeah but he has a big penis, so wife loses all rational thought and cheats twice a week for six months and does nit want to lose her husband but hey can't live without the big penis. Lol