All Comments on 'That's What Friends Are For Ch. 02'
by mindventure
- 10 Comments
Lone9653about 4 years agoWell written and great storyline. Believable in the sense that I’m a 21 year veteran and knew a few guys with similar arrangements. From don’t ask don’t tell or what happens on deployment stays on deployment kind of thing to prearranged guys like this who would take care of the spouse while deployed.
Some worked out just fine while others ended tragically when emotions become too intense.
I’m looking forward to see how yours turns out.
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Anonymousabout 4 years agoLoved the story and look forward to the next chapter
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Anonymousabout 4 years agoYour character development is very good, with each having a distinct personality. I am looking forward to further mis-adventures.
whatshername86about 4 years agoEveryone is benefiting for now. The sex scenes are fantastic and it’s nice to see a man putting a woman’s needs first. It’s subtle but obvious Jake is more interested in Barbara. It will be interesting to see how Leah is eventually going to respond when she realizes it. And my advice to Barbara..dump your loser husband, Kyle!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoThis chapter is one of the best I've read in a long time. The character development between Barbara and the narrator is excellent. I saw love instead of lust. As well, the satellite phone is great foreshadowing of potential conflict in the Barbara's marriage. Thank you for a thought provoking story line.
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