All Comments on 'The 14-Year Itch Ch. 01'

I’ve said it before: if you don’t take care of your wife, including in bed, someone else will. Doug is getting exactly what he deserves.

Intriguing with potential. Husband a caricature, lover less so but still while she seems real.

WOWWWWW whata story and what a final... please, go on soon!!!! ;)

5 stars. Erotic. Real. And quite sad. Cheating on her husband is one thing but laughing at him for his cluelessness is another. She is mocking his trust in her.

Yeah, he’s a jerk; but then get a divorce. Why stay with a man you don’t love?

This is pretty well written and an enjoyable read. Realistic presentation of Samantha’s emotional path and her husband Doug’s closed-minded, unempathic smugness. She deserves better, and she found it. Now, will she have the courage to dump the fool and put together a life with her lover, who seems so far to have genuinely fallen in love with her? Will she pay the price for her adultery? Looking forward to Part Two.

Do women forget what they say in church? For better or worse. And if you are going to fuck other men take precautions. Just show how stupid women are. And the divorce law should put the blame. Women would keep their legs close.

Doug si not the Best husband, we can have that, but unless you make him not only petty and self centered but add a cheater too, Samantha is crap material at this point. I wonder how you would wrap this.

I loathe cheaters, the only thing worse than cheaters are souses who withhold. So given his refusal to work on her concerns for nearly a decade I have no problem with her cheating.

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passing off a kid thats not her husbands however is not cool

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I can see not getting a divorce until the kids are older, but paternity fraud aint cool

Well written: The best possible outcome is all three are in the same room that a meteor falls on and kills them all. 3 awful people. Keep writing though. Love your writing. hate your character's guts.

@reedrichards - ReedRichards about 8 hours ago

"I’ve said it before: if you don’t take care of your wife, including in bed, someone else will. Doug is getting exactly what he deserves."

I agree that Doug is not giving Samantha what she wants and needs from Doug. But I don't think that Doug 'deserves' what Samantha has done to him by going behind his back and entering into an adulterous relationship with Lowell. Samantha should have continued her assault on Doug's lack of performance simply telling him "...you aren't the stud you think you are, honey...!" She could have gone as far as telling Doug that if he didn't step up, then, she would step out. This would possibly create a negative outcome. But her cheating and newly created embryo has definitely removed all doubts of a positive outcome for Samantha and Doug's marriage. Unless Doug turns out to be the new stereotypical Loving Wives husband who is a weak wimpy wuss and closet seeker of humiliation and emotional abuse. We'll see in the next installment I suppose if Doug trades in his pilot wings for a cage and pink panties. Here's hoping that isn't the case.

A slut and a dud. Why are they even married. She's a fucking whore, if she doesn't like what she's getting, at least do it on the up and up and divorce before cucking him.

Lol. All the anonymous incels are at it again. What poor sad muddyfuncsters they are.

A good story showing how the anonymous commenters on this site become the incels they are. They were all Doug at some time in the past and have now become the misogynistic incels that comment anonymously on this site.

Well done by the author for showing these excuses for men up.

Fantastic story, waiting for part 2

An empowered woman, a loser husband, a wonderful lover. All the elements of a great romance. She'll get the house, the kids, alimony, and get to keep her side piece.

Doug will end up a bitter impotent old man, masturbating to online porn.

More, please,

Love,

Central

Funny the misogynists see it only one way. The guy is a total loser, he has had the warning signs, he is leaving the marriage by neglect. If you cannot deliver a worthwhile amount of intimacy do not expect monogamy. She should serve the dud and find a real man.

In his comments, "ReedRichards" keeps forgetting that this is Lit and not real life. In reality, everything "RR" tries to explain may be true. However, the readers of the stories on Lit., especially "LW", are about people who have had experiences that they find reflected in some of the stories. They express their feelings in their comments. Some moderate, others excessive.

These people have values they believe in. Whether these values are our values is completely irrelevant. They react according to the values they live by. Bombarding them with disapproving or doctrinal comments is of little use!

Friends that fuck married woman say they are the best because everything is in the table out to prove. The longer they are married and younger the guy makes it more taboo plus the sneaking idea of being persued by a young guy makes it hotter . He said it’s easy because you tell them everything they want to hear and the right time stopmp. The poor hubby is working trying to give his family everything and when the wife gets mad of feels a bit neglected is how he captures her mind . He said he does the most deprived sexual acts . They all Tim his ass , facials anal and the dirty talk is a must . He had one flat slow fucking her ass after pounding her pussy facing a video camera making her talk dirty how she loves his young big cock fucking her , how it’s bigger and better than her hubby’s, he tells her how she’s cumming on a cock younger than her kids, how she will think about him taking her ass whiles she’s talking with hubby and kids then he pounds until she squirts and he pulls out turning her over Cum s on her face dick slapping her then turning her to face camera again . That was one video of many he showed us. Then one of the other guys confessed that he’s been fuck a guy we knew well mom for a year . He said the hottest was he went late when hubby was away on business he snuck in late while the friend and siblings were sleeping or in there room . She locked her door and he took her in her marital bed all night . He was whispering in her ear while he gucked her ass saying he’s been trying to hook up with her daughter to see if she takes it up her tight ass as well and who is the better fuck. She gets mad and he fucks her harder. For me I hate cheaters but it makes for hot stories. People don’t realize the destruction it causes to not just hubby and kids but both families and friends . Another friend said they need it and I want as much as I can get, men are just dogs . He only felt bad once at a happy hour a very attractive 59 year old married 35 years with four adult kids and s as away talks up her hubby who is a great guy . They all did shots for a retirement coworker her being drunk as she don’t drink he saw an opportunity followed her in the second bathroom upstairs in bar taking a aggression kiss then groping . He went for it pulling his cock out putting hand around it then pushing her down to sit on toilet . He pushed his cock in her mouth and she started sucking for a few then he pulled up by her hair spun her around bent her over pushed panties aside and fucked her . He pounded telling her how slutty this is her taking his cock in a bar bathroom., if your family could see you now then quickly pulled out spun her sitting her down again putting it back in her mouth face fucking her shooting down her throat then resting in on her face telling her how hot and slutty she looks . She broke out in tears and he felt bad . After two weeks she finally talked to him and he apologized but said to her how hot she is and would never tell anyone but just know your pussy was so tight and seeing her talk his cock down her throat swallowing his load is something he will forever remember and be greatful for and he pecked her on her lips

@mattenw i think lw stories hit the worst because alot of people have felt betrayal and felt first hand the destruction brought on by cheating.

When authors try to normalise or praise such reprehensible behaviour it is one of the worse things that can happen as some readers take them to heart and through repeated exposure form sucg things as the basis for their behaviour. I.e.: women who grew up on romance novels and have dangerously unhealthy attitudes, behaviours and definitions for what constitutes a healthy and loving relationship.

Looking forward to the next part. Doug was an ass, but he doesn't deserve a cheating wife. Samantha should have a) suggested that she try other men if he is not interested in getting help or b) if Doug didn't agree to plan A, then give him an ultimatum divorce or therapy.

I am hoping that Lowell tells her he isn't ready to be a dad the relationship end, Samantha does get divorced. She becomes a single mom for the bastard kid. Girls will suffer, but the marriage was doomed anyway. Lowell is also an ass for sleeping with a married woman. They are both morons for never even discussion protection. Good story

Intriguing tale. The husband is a self-involved jerk. And the wife has likewise become the same. Both are good at their work. And both seem good parents. But there is little quality time in the marriage. So it is no wonder the wife is vulnerable to straying. And now, pregnant pause....

Amazing story. Love the wife soo much

So if Doug's co-pilot hadn't of got lucky Doug could just get him drunk? That will work out well, plus domestic turn round times aren't so leisurely.

Doug is a jackass who doesn’t appreciate his family. That said, no man deserves a cheating slut wife.

Agree with WhoGivesAShit. Karma will get it's due.