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All Comments on 'The 150th Slave Pt. 09: Alternative Ending'

by roseyfingers

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MasterfuljimMasterfuljimover 8 years ago
Hmmm

By far the deepest chapter of the story to date. Looking forward to seeing how it ends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
YGTBKM!

A great series that is well past its prime. Put it to bed and save us a lot of misery.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Shit

I agree with masterfulljim!

I hope this is your worst ...

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Good semi-paradise semi-hell story.

I would personally have preferred much more overt sex and a lot less covert plotting amongst the characters.

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