All Comments on 'The 80/20 Solution Ch. 01-02'

I'm very impressed with these initial chapters. The characters are interesting and I'm a guy who enjoys sexual encounters, be these rough or loving, to follow along in a story. Leave it be I want to have a sympathetic acceptance of why a character does something.

Thanks for taking the time to write for us!

I look forward to additional chapters. Give one of these women a bush so they don't all have the 14 year old virgin appearance. Some of want our companions to have passed through puberty.

So who knew? I'm actually going to agree with Anonymous. Damn, that feels strange.

TFB you have a very good writing style and your characters are actually interesting to know. And, yeah it does make me nervous when a younger woman is defoliated. The natural muskiness of a woman is a real turn on for me.

I like the premise and look forward to see where it goes.