All Comments on 'The Absurd Halloween Costume Party'

Good idea, but it needs some development, and a little more tension before the cock sucking begins.

This “story” should have been called “notes on possible ideas that might, possibly, be developed into an outline for a short story!

I agree with the comments before me. I see a good, incomplete story.

Finish it!

I laughed through the whole thing. You do need to develop your characters and the environment more though. Please keep writing, you've done a great job so far, keep going!

Uh, is there more?