All Comments on 'The Accident Ch. 01'

You have a good concept going can't wait for more . dutch513 (can't log in for some reason)

The story is starting out great, I hope it can carry on and get even better. Keep up the good work.

One of the reasons I like this story is that it has plot potential. It could go anywhere. It will be very cool to see where FantasyLife77 takes Chris and his newly discovered super power.

Dancer sister, and a mom and aunt who teach yoga. Taboo is around the corner here.

and you write well. This has promise. Please continue.

Though not a fan of one pg. chapters, I can see the start of some very interesting chapters to come. I look forward to at least a 2 pg chapter #2

So much potential, can't wait for part 2!

Really enjoyed Ch 01. Can't wait for Ch 02!

Longer chapters please. This theme has tremendous promise.

An often used beginning. I hope you have some surprises coming. I have read many stories starting like yours. Some good, some not so good. Don't get caught in their plots. Think and plan before you write. Make the story yours and good luck.

Excellent start...I like longer stories also, 2-3 pages not 6 or 7. Waiting for chapt 2

A great start to the story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter

Early 30's with an 18 year old; not that likely unless you plan on having a really weird/convoluted knock up story. May want to go back and say late 30's at least.

Thanks for sharing. Now on to Ch 2.

it seems he has gained the ability to overcome his shyness.