by Sir Galahad
Please write more. I enjoyed the tale and would like more of their relationship.
I really liked this story!!! Job well done!!! We must see more of it. Keep up the great work!!!
great job... it reflects the gentle loving Master that is frequently ignoreed
Please Sir... even though it has been a long time, may we have more? Your style and skill are adictive. I want more!
I actually began reading it by mistake, thinking it was another story with the same title, by a different author. Nonetheless, I enjoyed your work immensely.
This series just begs to be added to. You cannot leave such a wonderful series up in the air.
i would urge you to write more.
Now that you've given us a delightful introduction to the main characters, it would be somewhat cruel to not tell us their story. Very well done piece of craftmanship.
Absolutely breathtaking. Thank you for a well written, thoroughly romantic and sexy story. I would love to have a private ceremony binding my Sir and i together like the one you described. And a night of total hedonistic pleasure such as you wrote.
Thank you so much.
cornycar... Sir Johns lady.
If this was a tale about blood drinking Voodoo worshipers or a story of some errant feudal Lord from the Dark Ages. Did he have a dungeon too? Started out well then faded into ridiculous melodrama. Ugh!
In 2003 when you wrote this I would have agreed.
Now, I say move to Sweden and become a Baron, America is headed for a huge crash.
This story is one of the few stories I have respect so much for the slave. Even though Susan willingly to use those degratory names to herself, Galahad still treat her with respect and kindness
I liked the story. But found it strange that he saves her from a whipping only to end belting and caning her bum mercilessly, whist having pegged her nipples and clit. Very painful indeed.
In the end, in many ways he was no better than her previous Master and just as cruel.
Scores 5/5
I really disagree Wargamer. She wants to be submissive and to be punished like the so called Sir Galahad did. The difference is, Sir Galahad (I can't remember his real name lol) cared about not overstepping the limits she set, but the former master clearly did not and went way too far
It is time!!!!! Twenty one years have passed. They have resolved their relationship perfectly and have had time and opportunity to be accepted in public as a loving couple. To marry and harvest some of her eggs for IVF impregnation. Perhaps a set of fraternal twins and a whelp a couple of years younger. This is when the kids would really be discovering themselves and developing their own nobel relationships. You can do it (if you are still around). The story can continue!!!!!