All Comments on 'The Accidental Nudist Cabin'

Great story with a good finish. Enjoyed it very much and a good entry into the competition.

Great story. Keep 'em cuming ... errr, coming.

of complete bullshit. should that be adults with a complete loss of sense of reality? + I am sure you never be in the nude longer than for your own shower or that the author is not a man. otherwise you would know somethings for certain.

I am sorry that this is the first time I have read anythng by you,on the bright side this means a lot of stories to catch up on.

Another great story, keep up the good work!

Fantastic story. There were elements I didn't like but the writer writes for him. Overall I thought it was a great read.

But now I REALLY need to know what happens in Cozumel! lol - loved it, thanks.

Great story of friendship,dealing with nudity in a mature way and realizing nudity is not a sin and more natural than we may realize. I think this is the best Nude Day story because every aspect of the story could easily be real.

My first read of your stuff. I won't leave your site for a long time, I'm afraid. I hope all the rest are as good! Thanks.

Enjoyed reading it. Good tail, plenty of action to be sure, and enough of a decent plot to give one a breather. LOL

Thanks

Up to your usual standard & if there should happen to be another 20 episodes or so ---- who am I to complain ?

This was a great story but way too long for my liking. I did read it and enjoy it and good luck in the contest.

GREAT STORY. GREAT ENDING. KEEP WRITING

Very nice story. Very well written, had a good flow to it and the action was very nice too.

Definitely keep it up, would love to read more from you.

wow...wish the story didnt end...great story

Great story with potential for more. Good Luck.

Great Sorry! Right up there with Convinience vs Needs. Love to see them return to the Cabin. Great potential to continue the story.

Jill never had the experence of having Alex when he is in his bull attitude like Robin has when he fucked to submission. I hope that Jill would get to feel what it's like to be fucked until she can't take anymore. Alex and Sheri being with Dan and Robin every two weekends will surely get the women pregnant,but the only thing is how will they know who the father of the children is.Great story and wanting to read what's next for the six of them. Thanks ............Rich

Bloody amazing. I can't really think of anything else to say except amazing. Fan-fucking-tastic. Thank you.

This was without a doubt one of my all time favorites. Wish it were illustrated.

Loved it.

I just finished reading the story myself, and have to say thank you, sincerely, to all of you who spent more than an hour sharing my dreams, and made it all the way to the end.

I'm shocked the story has done as well as it has. Only the second time a story of mine has made it to the top of a category, if only for a while. I know I don't deserve to be ahead of stories as good as The Journey, The Ice Maidens, Dive Dive Dive, Magic Pills, or anything by Slickman, DG Hear, or K.K. But I'll enjoy the feeling while it lasts.

And, as promised, I've already started plotting a follow-on story, where Alex and Dan catch the people ransacking the Accidental Nudist Cabin. Payback's a bitch.

You are one the greatest writers here on the site. I have never witnessed such passion, such debonare in writing as i have witnessed today. you sir, are truely visionary. please keep writing, I intend to keep reading your work, and I am looking forward to it. Kudos to you my friend, Kudos!

I loved this story. I see in the near future, or hope I will see in the near future more to this story, much more. Maybe carry it to the vision Robin had. I just hope you don't get bored with continuing this story. That would be our, your readers and fans, loss. I could see and almost feel everything clearly through Alex's eyes and body. I'm waiting with baited breath...Chuck

I'm rarely motivated to comment, but this was outstanding. Erotic, compelling, hot. Thanks!

Congrats on a great win. Well deserved win at that.

u kep on surprising us with ur tales.....

loved it... one of the best group action stories... best scene where sheri gets double teamed by guys smoking cigars....

cant wait for 2nd part

Gary

Whoa, Nellie! Great HOT-HOT SEX like this could wear a guy out. I've never vacationed at the right lake, I guess. Sex is supposed to be fun and laughter -- and this is one joyful barrel of monkeys. In short, a beautifully written fantasy! Nobody's got that knd of stamina, but it sure is delightful to dream about.

This is one of the best stories I have read..Nicely done!

wow absolute great storyy............keep up the good w0rk

I enjoyed every minute of it.

Very good story... I always enjoy your work... keep it up!!

Best group story I've read in a long time! I feel lucky to have stumbled across you and looking foward to reading more of your work.

I jacked off so much that I made my meat raw & drained. I especially enjoyed the last night with all the playing and hope that a sequel follows soon. Maybe some interaction among the women is called for in part 2 while the guys drop a load on them. Just a thought but a great story.

Wonderful story, good buildup, hot sex. I'll be looking for other stories.

Best one I've read so far. Fantastic.

Great read. Very believable. Loved the little touch in the end with Robin having a vision. I know girls who suddenly blurt out things like that from what to me is nowhere, but for them is inspiration.

The whole story is very believable. Congrats! Well deserved. I hope many people find this story.

How about the follow-up

What happens in Chapter 2 ?

Great build up. Loved how the characters were realistically conflicted about sharing their partners, AND (Alex+Sheri) talked about their concerns with their spouses in mature and loving ways. They didn't just dive into things without worries. Robin's such a sweetheart. Really loved that character.

I hope I like the rest of your stories as well.

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Lots of fun. Good description of the wives and an excellent job of helping the reader see all of the characters. Everybody was an individual with a recognizable personality as well as unique sexual characteristics and desires. You really need to give us another weekend or, perhaps, highlights of several weekends as this talented sextet gets comfortable as a traveling orgy going to swinger destinations around the Caribbean and elsewhere.

Loved the premise, just thought the whole sex process was way to fast. Maybe add a little reluctance on the wives instead of making them cock whores.

i'm lost of words,its really fantastic,love it.

This was okay, although I don't think it belonged in the "loving wives" category, given that at least two of the wives clearly had no respect for their husband, and didn't appear to care much whether their relationship continued or not. I mean "Jill" continued to make plans to cheat even after her husband objected, knowing their marriage was getting into "shaky" terratory, and the main character didn't tell her no. Probably "group sex" would have been the most appropriate category, since there is no "slutty whores" or "skanky hos" category. I don't usually care for stories about swinging or wife swapping, but this was okay. I guess I would have liked it better if it had played up the jealousy angle more, maybe with "Jack" getting much less than the others, for some reason (e.g., he had to go into town to make a business call or something), and comes back and watches through the window, finds out what a whore his wife is, and leaves. Also, it might have been better if told from the third person perspective. Thanks for posting, though.

And when do we read the next instalment ?

It seemed real I realy wanted to be part of the scene.

Amazing. I'm breathless. This is the best story I've ever read on Literotica. The writing was so smooth and professional, like a famous, accomplished mainstream author decided one day to anonymously write an erotic story. And here it is. I felt like I was there, with Alex. I felt like I was him. All the things that happened to him in the story happened to me as I read it. God why aren't there more authors like this? 5 stars, wish I could give it more. I'm sad the story is over.

I hope you publish this or another story. Exceptionally well written - and a sequel line for the next (40) years!

I enjoyed reading this story. It was one of the best on this site i have ever read.

I LOVE IT!! Can't wait for more stories from you

And one that we have talked about sharing with some intimate friends for quite a while. Perhaps this is the incentive to make it happen.

Thanks,

If this was pulled from real life experiences you're a very lucky guy. You got me all excited with some talk of anal and DP... hoping for a sequel or two to follow up on those themes. Best of luck for the next competition and thanks for the story.

as fellow okies who have spent alot of time at lake texhoma we have had our share of really good times there but i must say that were jealous and if you were to die now your tombstone should read hear lies one of the luckiest men who ever graced this earth

Your writing style flows so smoothly, so naturally - and your story-telling is SO hot! Alex may have a little super-human prowess, but not so over the top that it disturbs the mood. Best of all, the characters have human foibles and feelings - not a sexual automaton in the bunch. Thanks for sharing a beautifully crafted tale.

Teased nicely. Leaves it open to develop. Some anal and girl on girl would top it lovely.

This is simply the best erotica story I have ever read. Reading it in one go was almost a shame as I don't have anything better to masturbate to.

Revisit the cabin!

I was astounded by the positive feedback and multitudinous emails on this story. I swear I haven't forgotten you all. I have a plot for two follow-ons and a start to one of them. As soon as I finish the CvsN series (whose poor followers have been waiting many years for final closure) I will put some serious effort into getting the next story in the series out.

incredible story!!

you MUST write a sequel!!!

An absolutely beautiful story, well told.

I look forward to the reunion.

hp

Excellent, can't wait for the sequel. great tale. good reading and reads well

One fine story! Hope this continues.

Perfectly paced. Just perfectly. This is something that should be put in a textbook and studied by those who would be writers of any kind.

A truely great story Tx Tall Tales!! I hope that some day you may continue with a 2nd chapter!? This is the 3rd time I have read it, and just had to leave a comment.

usually a long story makes me look elsewhere but you had me from the start. Great story brother.

Even after reading many many stories over many years, this is still my favourite.

Wonderfully done...super hot and sexy. Where can my husband and I find this cabin? :)

and PLEASE tell me what happened to the vandals...

Kinda long but very entertaining, I completely enjoyed the w(hole) story especially since I'm trying to set up just such an adventure with my wife's sister and brother-in-law. Good job.

lasted me two and a half days, if you know what I mean, and it's that half that's killing me...

Alex seems to have fallen into a perfect dream life.

This is easily thee best sex stories I've ever read! What a turn-on from start to finish.

I freely admit that this is one of the very best erotic stories that I've ever read. Kudos!

the best store i ever read and not to long hope you have more about the naked cabin

I loved this story. It's exactly what Jean and I would love to do on a long wet weekend. Did I mention that she loves to tease as well. She'll love the story.

A fantastic read, not to long nor to short, Thanks

I could not tear away from this story! So well written I could see the detail of the place, people and events. The only thing that could have made it better was us being there :-)

GREAT story! The pacing was excellent, the sex HOT, the characters realistic and believable.

After getting engrossed in the story, your fear of it being too long was unfounded. What a wonderful story and an easy read.

Thanks for sharing!

I have just discovered this story, which is one of the best I've read for a long time!

Have you published the follow-up, as I can't see anything that looks like it in the synopses of your contributions?

It seems the main character got a bit more attention than the other guys... it would be nice to see this story from the other men's point of view where they got as much action as Alex did.

Loved this story liked the way it developed and the long distant ending, I was expecting them to go back to the cafe and find the lost saddlebags-

nice one keep writing?

Loved the pace and detail......It could have been so real.....Nice job

I'm not a big fan of this genre-truth to tell. The fact I read this story frm start to finish and don't regret it is due to the author's skill of making the characters real people with well founded trepidations and temptations and not perpetually rutting maniquiens. The author has my 5 star rating for this story and my thanks. P.S I enjoy all your woman characters but how about you getting a little jungle fever and letting Alex pair off with a fine fine sistah' . Please!

I agree it would be great to get the other characters view point the gals and the other guys, I couldn't stop reading it intil I finished it, looking forward to Dan getting rascals who did the damage and then some, great writing please continue with these characters,

I absolutely thoroughly enjoyed this story - one of the best i've ever read on this forum.

This plot could and should be turned into a nice porn flick!

Instant classic. One of my all-time favorites. Well done! BRAVO!

the pace is beautiful. u have it.

TX you have it down. After reading one of your stories the wife and I have some of our best fucking. Keep it up

can't wait to read the next chapter. good story. Great job!!!!!

Consider this statement from the main character:

"played along. I grabbed her chin and pulled her face up. "Head up, wench. You're mine now. Any common skirt like you should be happy, nay, proud to be claimed. I will have you again, when we're alone and perhaps when we're not. You'll deny me nothing!" I stuck my softened cock back in her mouth, feeling it harden as she looked at me anxiously, sucking on demand."

It looks like she did prefer him to Jack, and that Jack is no longer really her husband. The main character is her man, now. Jack is just a guy she sleeps with while the main character is with his first wife.

I see divorce in Jack's future, once he figures it out, and how the women preferred the main character to their own husbands. He seems to be a proud man who wouldn't stand for it. He can find some other woman better than one who obviously has no respect for him.

You're an incredible writer! So realistic and well told that I can believe it is all true... and wish I was there! Great job... score 10 out of 5.

this is a superb example of erotic escapism. It is well paced, stunning character development and as many have commented, throughly believable.

You have talent, I suspect that you are a published author indulging a secret fantasy in a "safe" environment.

Congratulations, you have surpassed the challenge!

Hubby and I look forward to additional contributions.

I WOULD LIKE YOU TO WRITE ABOUT BABIES BEING BORN AND THOSE INVOLVED NOT BEING SURE WHOSE THE DADDY AND THEN CONTINUE WITH THE NEXT GENERATION

I was so into the story, I felt like I was there. (I wish!) Keep up the good work.

...should be the title.

Extremely well written, and very few syntax or spelling errors (which tend to annoy the crap out of me). Maybe the constant action was a little unbelievable, but hey, its a fabulous fantasy to get carrird away into.

In short, a great way to blow a couple of hours of my life away. Well done, I gave it a 5. Look forward to more, please.

Loved your story. As you said it was a long one but I think it was as long as it needed to be. I liked the way the story developed and the characters too. Would love to know how they find the thieves.

Cracked me up.

An awesome piece! Do a sequel now!!

My wife is the hottest most beautiful woman I have ever known. I would love to share the weekend with a group of friends as nice as these people. Maybe a large dick for her would show just how much I love her. This is the grestest story I have read in the three years I have been reading these stories. It's the 1st time I've wanted to share the joy of sex with my wife with other men.

that was incredible, i was hard the whole time i read the story . didn't get much work done at work but plan on working on my wife tonight. would love to read more about the cabin

Awesome story...enjoyed every moment of it

Nice bit of escapist fantasy. You really get the erotic sparks flying. It does seem more like a 'Group Sex' story than 'Loving Wives', but that's really just a quibble. Sheri's little shrug was a delightful touch. . .

And. . . does anyone really think that 'if you just stick it in me, it's not really fucking?'

;)

Well written story. You build the suspense slowly, but not too slowly. You nicely tie up the lose ends and the end of the story. A really enjoyable bit of fantasy. Keep up the good work!