All Comments on 'The Actor Ep. 01'

How the hell did you convince me to help you write a cowboy story? Just teasing, I love it and I had so much fun writing this with you. Pure Gold, right?

sob sob, oh please don't shoot the bear...I know! Shoot the dumb fucker...Yeah he'd poison the lovely bear if she bit that city scum...

next next please

Ohhh No! A cliff hanger. Please don't shoot the Mama Bear. Maybe Chad can be finally useful as Bear Food. Please continue this story. +5 Stars.

Constructive criticism: Chad is written WAAAY too broadly.

Okay for a comedy, but if you want us to take the story serious then tone him down 100%. As he is now, no redeeming features, he is so bad it makes you question Jamie's intelligence.

You are supposed to root for the young woman, not think she's an idiot or an emotionally wrecked doormat.

Aside from that, it's fun and different. I like Jake and the vet. That part sounded believable. He reminds me of the guys I see when I visit the ranch supply store in North Missoula.

At the end give Jake a role in an upcoming Hallmark movie as the star's cowboy father.

Sexy Jake is one very attractive, masculine muscular man. Give that great sexy guy a spray of sexy chest hair for his great body! I'm anxious to read more of the adventures that I think are coming for Jake and Jamie!

And too bad stupid Chad is going to be saved by Jake's rifle!

Can't wait for more!

Please continue this story. Would love to see how Chad gets what he deserves, and how sexy Jake is rewarded. He is one sexy, level-headed loving man. Bring a Jake into my life, and I'd show him a good time, playing with his cock and sexy body. Hope he has a sexy hairy chest! What a man!

4/5 for a cliffhanger....hate em. Well written and Jamie was a nice twist away from Liz. Doesn't really feel like a Romance yet.

Good start but 4⭐️. Because Chad is just to over the top like the brother Chet in weird science.

Good beginning!

4

4*, starting well but what color are Jamie's eyes? You have it that Jake mentions her having blue eyes: "You know, most redheads have green eyes, or maybe brown. But your blue eyes... they're... enchanting." but then he looks into her green eyes later: "He looked into her longing, sparkling-green eyes."

Should have written more....hate continued stories.

Please get sexy Jake and Jamie together! They really deserve the happiness that each can provide for the other. I imagine Jamie rubbing against Jake's hairy chest, burying her face and nose in the sexy sweaty hair at the center of his manly chest!!

Oh you clever son of a gun… a cliff hanger!!? <Laughing>

Well done. Of course, waiting on the continuation now.

Really hope he shoots Chad rather than the poor bear.

Nicely written and apart from the obvious question of why she’s with the idiot at all, it all reads well. Classic cliff hanger!

It is an absolute fact that the utter dickheads in this life are completely oblivious to their own shortcomings, sadly modern life has prevented Darwinian theory from weeding out all those that ought not to breed, Chad is just such an example. I’m rooting for the Bear.