All Comments on 'The Actor Ep. 05'

I'm enjoying the story but the graphic section is steadily increasing which is actually detracting from the story. You had 3 graphic set scenes in 3 pages in this chapter. Please think about rebalancing your story and it will get better.

LMFAO at Jamie being indignant that Chad was cheating on HER. Pot calling the kettle black much? Oh and the "Daddy" "Babygirl" nonsense is disgusting.

Jamie getting back together with Chad ruined the romance for me. Story is starting to drag out for a romance, maybe it is in the wrong category?

Good chapter!

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So, So glad Jamie walked out on Chad and kicked him and his trash bags to the curb! She deserves the love of Jake, loves to be surrounded by his hairy chest and warm, loving body!