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Click hereThe dog absolutely adored me. It would follow me around whenever I was home. It would lie patiently at my feet when it sensed I didn't want to play, and would bound around me ecstatically when I did. She DID prove to be a good watchdog. And, oddly enough, she had another amazing talent. She was a fishing dog. She would sit quietly in the boat as I fished, watching my line with patient interest. If I got a strike, she would perk up her ears. And if I hooked into a sizeable fish, she would bark and jump around until I'd landed it, and then she'd stand proudly over it, as if she'd caught it herself.
She proved to be a great dog. She really loved me. She really loved the girls.
And, a couple months later when she met the White Witch, she really loved her, too.
Its ok, but I lost it when the slaves persuade the Master 1) to have a baby 2) to get a dog and 3) get a female dog. What kind of pussy whipped master is he? if they really are so eager to please him they would search for a male dog because that what he wanted.
Lost me
Alright story I suppose. One thing that stands out to me as wrong is the way your protagonist talks about money. "Five star restaurant" is a phrase that I've only ever heard lower middle class and below use. Also, a $700 suit for a heiress? That's not acceptable really. Someone of that caliber would be wearing tens of thousands to look the part. But I suppose she was cloistered.
Either way, keep it up.
Love the Idea of Dee giving up her Baby to Cement her Slave relationship too her Master. But it would stretch the Imagination to accept that Someone would'nt Recognise Dee from meeting with her and her Father over buisness.
even though he kept a tight leash on her.
He had her meet with others over Buisness.