All Comments on 'The Adulterer'

Learn to write in at least some complete sentences. Wasn't humorous, at times hard to follow with so many grammatical errors.

A stiff dick has no conscience.

Cuck shit, should be in the geisha pages NOT Loving Wives

Score 1/5

So often I find myself say "Great story, but the end ruined it!"

Not this time.

The end saved it!

5*

I truly hope no one worth a shit was hurt when this train derailed.

It was like reading a toothache, one that requires a root canal...which may or may not be, preferable to this story.

That last paragraph was literally a buzzer-beater! Nice save! 5/5!

Don't give up your day job , maybe you should find one if you like eating. Haven't read one of your story's that didn't suck.

I don’t care for stories celebrating cheating whores, but the last couple paragraphs redeemed this one a little. His revenge has to start somewhere, and I hope he has something special planned for the bitch.

just poorly written.

Just a waste of time reading this shit. The fact that his husband knew for multi years & did nothing but suspect, then finally going after his alleged friends-- so unrealistic to be laughable. Just a sorry (in multiple ways) story.

Warning! Cuck shit!

Seems like this touched a raw nerve with a lot of commenters. Either that or there are an awful lot of people out there who just don't have a sense of humour. I loved it, it made me LOL. 5stars plus.