All Comments on 'The Adventure - Wings of Fate'

Very nice.

Worst story I’ve ever read, very, very boring

It was a short story, had a nice pace, a warm tone and a warning that it wasnt all sex. Your writing style is gentle, but does need some minor edits. I would love to know what happens next. A good story doesn't need to be start to finish sex. Richard was attentive, sensitive and understanding. A gentleman that any special girl would like to meet. I felt there was a connection between them and just enough emotion to make it real. Luv Chloe x

What a delicious little bit of writing you have done. I, and I’m sure a lot of other men, have wished for such a little fantasy airplane meeting. A couple of comments: using try, and instead of try to makes your writing sound a little like grammar school.

@xDarkAngel0, @stockingnut and Anonymous thank you for your encouraging comments. The next instalment is ready to post soon.