All Comments on 'The Adventures of Andrew Ch. 01'

by jklazarus

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RichardBentwoodRichardBentwoodabout 8 years ago
Awesome

Great story, and if there really is a Paul, you better have his back forever.

auguy86auguy86about 8 years ago
Was this your first story?

If so, extremely impressive. Nicely written and very believable; both are keys to a good first time story. Even if Andrew didn't go all the way in this chapter, you set him up perfectly to lose his virginity to Melissa, at least I presume. Anyhow, nice job. Keep writing please!

J_RReaderJ_RReaderabout 8 years ago
Please continue

I hope there will Mode.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Next chapter?

Good chapter hope you continue with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
please do the next chapter

Please carry on the story it's so good

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Nice!

I agree with previous comments...next ch?

Can't wait to see how he interacts with Melissa.

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