by jklazarus
Great story, and if there really is a Paul, you better have his back forever.
If so, extremely impressive. Nicely written and very believable; both are keys to a good first time story. Even if Andrew didn't go all the way in this chapter, you set him up perfectly to lose his virginity to Melissa, at least I presume. Anyhow, nice job. Keep writing please!
I agree with previous comments...next ch?
Can't wait to see how he interacts with Melissa.