All Comments on 'The Adventures of John Law Ch. 01'

Loved this story... did not seem like a first effort at all. It resonated with truth and sincerity. It sounds like your mother truly cared about you and wanted to teach you. At the same time she added another dimension of love to her own life... something beautiful.

It is a very hot and readable story. It is surprisingly good for a first try. I had problems with the whole G spot thing, though. I think it's an anachronism. I don't remember much talk about it until the late '80s or early '90s.

But fine job nevertheless.

R.

This story was 5***** all the way, the players were,

real to me. The way MOM dresses around the house,

WOW!!!! that would be hard on any man but a

teenager look out. well done, easy read.

...THANKS..