All Comments on 'The Adventures of Tim Bodge Ch. 08'

I really like the story, but the grammar, punctuation and words with random appearing capitalization makes reading difficult at times. Your editors are not helping you at all.

As an example:

Has for the leader, everyone is afraid to talk. So No, they don't know who the leader is.

Shouldn't this be?

As for the leader everyone is afraid to talk. So no, they don't know who the leader is.

Thank you for your help. I use Word365, Grammarly Pro, Ginger, Both did not catch that. The editor is helpful, but I am not paying him. I am trying, Hope you will keep reading, and letting me know how I'm doing.

Again THANKS.

Is there an editor out there wanting to help. Just contact me.

I'd be glad to help with that. I've already contacted you on SOL...

There are still, in chapter 8, considerable editorial issues, wrong words, odd conversation strings and linkages… good content, tied down by editing issues…