by Sarah Sidal
Could have been much better, but it was very selective, descriptive. These fantansy stories should be regarded as fantasies and offer more eroticism such as getting bred, etc.
Yeh I can relate to your story. I closed my eyes and was there. You have that certain something in describing your inner thoughts. Was very evocative indeed.
erotic and romantic-who could ask for more? excellent description, slow and erotic crescendo, very real feelings...this story has it all