All Comments on 'The Affair'

Gret premise!

But the sex is skimmed over too fast. Needs many more details. Needs extended, well described, foreplay and teasing. Needs dialog during sexual activities about how each is thinking/reacting to what's going on. Needs her to have asked him if he masturbated to thoughts of her. How often? What did he think about when jerking?

Needs more description of her body. What are her breasts like? Nipples? Pussy -- shaved, trimmed, hairy?

And what the hell is "vrashing"? Crashing?

Four stars.

Needed more moral struggle to create risk and high stakes! It just lacked both personal growth and tension. You need to have a little bit of both or a whole lot of one to hold interest.

This was just a dull story so the added sex was doomed to read dull.

Just another cheating asshat, with a bizarre circumcision angle thrown in? Wtf.