All Comments on 'The Aftermath'

This is romance???

There doesn't seem to be much romance in the story, in fact none at all. Now if this Chapter 1 and the story continues there it may end up a romance story. One would hope anyway.

Despicable characters with backstory...okay...next!

I found it very sad, and moving, and disturbing. In addition to being very sexy.

I can't tell whether this is the first part of something longer--but if you're thinking about continuing it, I hope you will.

Best, ohio

I like this story. It was creative. Dark and troubling. Makes the reader think and wonder. Well written.

Two people who are obviously very sexually compatible. But, it proves that sex isn't love. Although, some people want to believe that.

Your comments and lack of understanding on the story Miranda point out why much isnt there.

I'm amazed that there aren't many comments on this one. It's a bit mysterious, yet clear enough--and full of strong emotion. I liked it very much.

Thanks, ohio

Good descriptive narrative and character development. Dark subject but well told; like, the emotions of two people who have a history they wish they could change and raw emotions that prevent a relationship.

Continuing to to the same selfish, destructive behavior that defined why they're despicable. I don't want to hear about their self serving depravity. I went above where I think this should be rated and gave it a 2 for grammar and spelling.

Sad story but goes to show how one's actions can destroy a family and its relations, but then again like they say what goes around comes around. 4 stars