by jlorthia
I hope there will be another chapter...2 pages and you've created a far more interesting story than most of the authors on here make in 5
I initially wrote this story to end with a kind of "cliff hanger" and uncertainty and had no intention of writing a sequel, but the positive response is making me rethink this and it is very possible that I may write a sequel. Thank you!
You hit a lot of the things I like - I really enjoyed it!
There were a few things to do with the costuming that pushed me out of the story, which I realize probably isn't an issue for most readers. If you'd like to talk some more about that, hit me up through my profile! I'd be happy to give some tips.
I agree with all the comments. I thoroughly enjoyed this, really well written....I want more! Please and thank you
This is bloody genius. I really appreciate stories that emphasise the psychological over the physical.