All Comments on 'The Age of Enslavement Pt. 01'

I enjoyed the story overall, though it feels a bit like we've arrived halfway through. I'd love to read about Elizabeth's first class in more detail and get a bit more backstory. But I'm looking forward to seeing where this goes!

Interessting first story. I liked how you introduced your world.

If I could give you a tip then it would be not to mix too much at least in the same scenes. We have slavery, incest, degradation which could overhelm the reader.

I'm already looking forward to the next chapter.

great start

With very few but well chosen words, you transmit very well the joyful aspects of submission, creating a highly satisfying experience.

Keep up the good work.

Very great story, I'm looking forward to the sequel

I would love a sequel!

Part 2 please