All Comments on 'The Airline Stud Ch. 02'

It was too narrative. Not enough detail about his time with the girls. Also, the Cloie, from first story but mentioned in this chapter, was such a perfect woman (physically and personality) that Alvin seemed like a jerk instead of a stud.

Author seems to think being a stud requires a man to be indifferent and uncaring. Conquests and a girl in every city are fine, but that doesn't mean he ignores them after first time. Sydney (several girlfriends) was what I'd expect everywhere. The hotel clerk whore was a weird situation. Why pay her. A seduction and gift on future visits makes more sense. He mistreated Chloe. Chapt 1 ended with promise for an interesting tale. This chapter was blah.