All Comments on 'The Alhambra'

A great story teller. Loved the flow and descriptive narrative. Look forward to seeing more of your work.

Very well composed-Please give us more.

Lost me at "the president's slut". Fantasy is all well and good, but real life slut-shaming kills the fantasy, I was no longer invested in the story.

I'm only on pg2 but I have to comment on "scotch and rocks". I was young, traveling on business, first class. I asked for a single malt on ice. The flight attendant just stood there staring at me for what felt like days then said "no" turned and walked away then returned with my scotch neet. A place like the Alhambra would never commit such a heinous crime as putting ice in scotch:)

Oh, Scotch is whisky, no e. Bourbon is whiskey.

I know, it's a nit. Sorry.