All Comments on 'The Alien's Gift'

by pietro108

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I love the concept of a spacecraft that is basically orgasm powered. Good thing they don’t age or they would eventually have to carry a huge supply of Viagra or be stuck floating in space. The way you managed to shoehorn War of the Worlds into this was truly inspired. I could see this becoming a series of stories considering the fact that Hana is an engineer and given enough time, which they seem to have plenty of, could learn to repair or even possibly improve their ship. The sad part is that James could be replaced by a vibrator since his usefulness is basically a type of gas pump at a service station. Great story and lots of fun. Thanks for the great use of your writing and creating skills.

J.D.

Diecast1Diecast1almost 3 years ago

A really good story. AAAAA++++

MarkT63MarkT63almost 3 years ago

Interesting idea!!! Great storytelling...

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBabout 2 years ago

This needs to be a series

SatyrDickSatyrDickover 1 year ago

[02.10.22]

Mucho Kawaii!!

11/10!!!!!

GuyfromShadesGuyfromShades7 months ago

Crazy. Thanks for your writing.

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Dutch immigrant to Australia at age 6. Arrived with no English language. Catholic schooling. University to study teaching. Teacher for 42 years. Retired. Married since 1979.