All Comments on 'The Anal Alternative'

by Pabiporffor

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NnnelsonNnnelsonabout 1 year ago

Justice is served. Great concept and story. I have to say I was hoping for more of a train. Maybe for more serious offenses.

P_AndererP_Andererabout 1 year ago

Weird enough to be strangely enjoyable, lol!

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineabout 1 year ago

Ha! Loved the last sentence. TBH, I’d. Intentionally break the law if I knew this would be my punishment.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Very interesting premise, well written. What a joy to be chosen as the punisher. The only objective you have is to bottom out in a woman's ass and ejaculate balls deep in her. And I like the potential the author posed of a court position as punisher. WHAT A GREAT JOB!!!!

Fit_2_Be_TiedFit_2_Be_Tiedabout 1 year ago

I think this is the Brexit some were voting for ;p Funny idea

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well written short story. A fun approach to punishment. Strange things happen after brexit ;)

ReedRichardsReedRichardsabout 1 year ago

I guess that male offenders get the same punishment while they’re in prison.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Bloody Brexit.....

Gym52Gym5210 months ago

An unusual but extremely interesting premise for punishment, the story has been well developed and written, should this become law I would happily volunteer as a court appointed punisher.

Melvin93Melvin936 months ago

This was really good. Any chance of a follow up?

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

really good story. Would love for you to write more in this genre. thanks

OlderwiserstillhornyOlderwiserstillhorny2 months ago

Very well written, your way with words makes it a great read. Like your style, looking forward to reading more of your work.

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